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Wednesday, 26 March 2014
A letter from Gallipoli
3 comments:
Anonymous
said...
This is a good start to writing a letter. Although your letter lacks a lot of detail about what you are experiencing as a soldier, (remember you were to use some of the knowledge we gathered about the soldiers on Gallipoli and living in the trenches) you still have a beginning and end. You just need to work on the middle.
3 comments:
This is a good start to writing a letter. Although your letter lacks a lot of detail about what you are experiencing as a soldier, (remember you were to use some of the knowledge we gathered about the soldiers on Gallipoli and living in the trenches) you still have a beginning and end. You just need to work on the middle.
Miss H
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I am proud of my work because I liked to tyep
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