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Tuesday, 18 March 2014
Short Recount Sensory Garden
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
This piece of writing doesn't look complete Raxit. It looks more like a brainstorm of ideas than a paragraph of your observations of the garden and surrounding area, based on your senses.
1 comment:
This piece of writing doesn't look complete Raxit. It looks more like a brainstorm of ideas than a paragraph of your observations of the garden and surrounding area, based on your senses.
You need to finish this please.
Miss H
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